Joanna hated witnessing the doe-eyed trophies suspended inverted from a scaffold at the end of the harbor, their purple tongues pointing toward the bloodied ground. She hated watching fish with gaping gills flop to death on the bottom of her family’s boat. She loathed the mounted antlered head above the fireplace and the bearskin rug in front of the hearth. Harpooned whales may have sustained her ancestors, but they haunted her dreams. Joanna understood the hunted heart. She didn’t see the point in hurting innocents and ached for the day when she’d no longer be her papa’s favored prey.
Written for Charli’s 99 word April 26 Carrot Ranch flash fiction challenge:
April 26: Flash Fiction Challenge
Excellent little piece!
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That final line packs a punch (not to making light of your topic).
Well done!
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Whaling quakers harbor dark secrets. You hook the reader and reel her in; ‘the hunted heart’… great take on the prompt.
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Very well done. Only the hunted can truly understand.
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Thank you, Norah.
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Wow! Your last line really told the story!! ❤
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Thank you, Colleen.
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Powerful and profound …
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Thank you.
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a pleasure!
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